User blog comment:Eira Arian/A Servamp OC(because who hasn't made at least one?)/@comment-4754943-20170512132221

Hey!

I just read over your OC^^. You're right, some of this is really fairly cliche, but a lot OC's I've read about are that way, so I think it wouldn't be cliche if not many people liked it.

I have to admit, I was a bit confused over the fact, she is Tsubakis Eve, since he seems he doesn't want to have one, but since OC's belong to fan fiction genre for me, that's acceptable^^ Or maybe something should happen inbetween them, that really makes Tsubaki that curious about her - or makes him trust her. But that is totally up to you! I am just writing down my thought after all, so no offenece here =)

The outward appareance is not created by you (I mean the pictures the links follow right?) but still she has a cute appereance, really, really fitting for her name^^

Talking about the name - I like it, that her name is Welsh, and I really like the name you gave her. I think the name fits her character^^.

First I thought, regarding her character (beeing timid, and bullied in school) Tsubaki could really scare her off with his character traits, but then again, maybe his beeing different, and "somehow sepreated" from his siblings (as he was sad about senseis death, and is a person who feels lonley somehow, saving others who have no place in the world either) is just what it needs to make friends with someone like Eira. Now I think they probably could really get along quite well^^.

I also wrote a fan fiction myself with Tsubaki as a main character. But here my OC did not become his eve but eventually his subclass. They met when Tsubaki just was about having "fun" scaring the OC Teresa mostly named Terry. He wanted to hear her screams when trying to "kill" her - but unlike he thought, she did not really panic, so he finally did not kill, but save her - turning her into a subclass. Terry was different from most people he knew/met, she was not really obident to him. She did not like to follow orders. Her special talent is to imagine attacks and create them (like shoting fire balls at her enemy, or lightnings or making a sword appear that functions as her weapon). In a fight, she won over Higan, and finally really got Tsubakis attention.

In the story, they got attacked by C3 at some point, where she could use her magic attacs to keem them save, yet she refused to fight a war with Tsubakis siblings as she felt, he could probably regret it someday - because she believes, he only wants to kill his siblings because it was senseis last wish/ senseis assignment for him.

Terry seems to be quite the opposite of your OC, and still I think, if Tsubaki had her as his eve, my story would still function (If I were to use Eira as an eve in my story - don't worry, I won't "steal" her, it was just an idea that came into my mind). Terry is a strong character, prepared to fight, if it's necessary, she won't give up easily. She is a quite person, observing, understanding and is better with persons who are not concidered "normal". She doesn't open up her feelings to other people, exept for those she really, really trusts. One thing, she has in common with Eira in her background, because she was so inapproachable, classmates tried to bully her, but realizing she wouldn't break, they eventually stopped. Still, she was quite lonely, so it was not that "bad" for her to become a vampire, as she did not have a lot of peoply she had to hide it from.

It took me hours to make this story creditable, really. Why did I tell you about it? Well, I thought you could may be interested^^.

Sorry for my English - you have probalby noticed by now, but I am not a native speaker.

All in all, I like your character^^. Did you write a fan fiction with that character?? (just curious)

--Akemi